i agree my latest addition was perhaps not the strongest. i was trying to move away from the geometry in an attempt to mix things up. i think it is important we use some figurative marks too. the significance of the tree was weak. i think of trees when i think about height. i understand i might be alone in that theory. but i am glad you picked up on my attempt to introduce some imagery taken from life.
i appreciate your points about common association. this is something i should have picked up on. its one of those things i know but do not know i know. so to have it pointed out to me is useful.
i think your right that it seems to contradict the bands current image and style. so i think fairly concisely we can give thumbs down to trees. my bad. there was nothing wizardous about what i did, a bit of live tracing and some minor edits was all. my skills are developing, but i think im a way off your abilities yet.
i think this composition needs to be left alone now. there are some amazing visuals that have cropped up, and the exercise is a good one to help us get creative.
im ready for round two,
...quiet please, Chatwin to serve.
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